This is a record of my learning at Red Hill School, Auckland, New Zealand.
Kia ora Dontay,I like the way you have created your information about yourself. The colours are effective together. Remember to use full stops and I think you have too many 'ands' in your sentence.Mrs Krausse
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Kia ora Dontay,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you have created your information about yourself. The colours are effective together. Remember to use full stops and I think you have too many 'ands' in your sentence.
Mrs Krausse